Todays crit went quite well. I got some quite useful feedback. One being that I hadn't labelled everything correctly so I have gone back and changed it all, so now everything should be correct. Another thing pointed out to me was that I need to put my images through issu if I have more than 4, which, again I have now gone back and done. So that should all be sorted out now.
These are my boards that I took with me to the crit: